Score: 7

"Immoble Eyebrows"

submission: Vice Faction: Episode 12

date: July 9, 2008

It is hard to figure out how to give it a score. The drawings aren't bad at all, but there was barely any animation. It is sort of like you drew the characters in fixed positions, and then just added lip sync later. It's not bad that you didn't move any arms, but there was barely any emotion that corresponded with the actors voices. No eyebrows moved or anything. It was like everyone talked in a neutral way. Hopefully the next few episodes will change this. Anyways, good job on everything else. The voice actors did a great job.

Score: 10

"Good Work"

submission: TouchDwnTurnAround Collab

date: July 9, 2008

I'm glad I'm not co author cause honestly my procrastination only let me make like 8 seconds of animation. Hopefully next time ill make something better. Rtil's and Jaxxy's parts were my favorite. And of course, 50% of the rest was all Frozenfire which even amazed me. If anything, I hope this gets frontpage or and decent award because you guys deserve it. And who made that awesome Kanye Bear. He is so awesome :D.

There really werent any bad parts. I still kind of wish you would have let me recreate some stuff, but oh well. I did change my mind like 500 times. Peace

Score: 9

"ROFLness"

submission: WeRBopBop #18

date: July 9, 2008

That was very funny. At first, seeing the animation style, I didn't think I'd enjoy it. I was guessing it was going to be a cutsy cartoon, but it ended up being the opposite. Everything felt so random, but it worked so well and the characters all had me dying from laughter. Anyways, make more :P.

I guess the only thing I can say is work having some of the characters feet move when they walk

Score: 10

"Old School Gags Still Work!"

submission: Chicken Galoora

date: July 3, 2008

Even when I've seen this stuff before back in the old days of cartoons like Road Runner, or Tom and Jerry, I still can't help but laugh. The gags bring back a lot of memories of me sitting in front of the television hoping for Wile E Coyote to fail miserably. The frame by frame animation was very well done, although the background could use some good touch ups. Overall, very impressive. I'll be watching more of your work.

Score: 10

"I'LL TRAIN THEM, YAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY"

submission: Crows' Life Episode 3

date: July 3, 2008

Ive been wanting to review for a while, but man am I lazy. Well let me begin. The animation is of course fantastic as always. Everything moved well with the voice acting it all worked well with the characters. It felt like a show I would see on Adult Swim.
Speaking of the voice acting, both the english and the spanish were very well done. They all fit the characters and everything. Octavio was my favorite character (anyone with the power of laserbeams is cool in my book)
I had only one problem with the flash and you probably hear this alot, but the ending just didn't make sense. Hopefully you will tie it in in the next episode (I read your blog and you said it would make more sense so I can't wait).
Also, let me know where you get your sounds. I know a few spots, but more knowledge wouldn't hurt. Good work Arturo and the Toonimated crew. I wish i had a crew :P

Score: 8

"Jeez EDD"

submission: EW: Moving Targets

date: July 2, 2008

Do you take potty breaks lol? How do you make these long animations in such a short amount of time. It takes me a month to make half the length of this. Is it because your characters are all the same or the squishy animation (I love how things bounce) you use. Man you are fast. My favorite part of the animation ironically was the part where there was no animation and you see the characters all buff in the general's eyes. That was great

I really would like to know how you get this done so fast. Like all your animations, there is always work put into it, even if the animations are sometimes simple, but hey, its seven minutes long. I can't complain hahah. Good work yet again EDD.

Score: 8

"Awesomesauce"

submission: pull my finger gag

date: July 1, 2008

Honestly, I didn't expect to laugh when I first started watching it, but man was it funny. I didn't see the end joke coming at all. Then animation was actually good. It could use a few inbetweens here and there, but I understand you were just messy around, so i can forgive that. Im surprised it only took you an hour to make this. Good work.

Score: 10

"Where have you been"

submission: sherry enema: #2

date: June 20, 2008

Dang man, long time no see. You are never on anymore. Anyways, the flash overall was good. I see you are sticking to the hit that trend animation wise. I would like to see you do some other stuff with color sometime... perhaps wankmen. Anyways, hope you get this. Peace :P

Score: 9

"Good work"

submission: CatFat Episode 1

date: June 14, 2008

Loved the animation man. It definitely kept me interested, seeing everything move vibrantly. The backgrounds were wonderful, but that's no surprise because you are always doing good work with coloring and drawing backdrops. The only problem i had was the fact that the beginning was slow ( everyone seems to think that), but near the end it picked up the pace. However I see that the introduction was necessary to tell us about FatCat. Hopefully you continue the series and make it a good one to watch for. Peace
-Kartune :P

Score: 7

"Wheres the fbf?"

submission: Syndacite Chapter 2

date: March 7, 2008

What i liked about the first episode was that there was decent fbf and when they talked, there was more effort in their body language, but in this one, there was none. When i first saw the score, i was like, it should be higher. Then I watched the whole thing.

Cons:
There were two or three moments where the characters actually moved as they talked, but the rest, it seemed like you were trying to cut corners.

They talked with stiff necks like robots. And I in the beginning, I saw the back of the villains heads more than the front, which meant you really were trying to avoid lipsync. And I understand, its 13 minutes, but there was barely any movement to make it even more entertaining. The biggerst problem with the talking was when they go into the room with the crew. And there is this guy talking, but you just see the top half of his face move up and down. I was like, "come on studio nightbird, you can do better".

Pros:
I will say this though, it is very long, and it should be shorter, but you indeed take the time out of your months to make this flash. I would probably get lazy halfway through.
What i like is your attention to the background detail. The backgrounds were always fun to look at, and i sometimes would just stare at the backdrops behind the characters who were talking. I like how you use 3d programing in flash, that's what makes me see that you did indeed try, but got lazy in the animation side.

So thats my critique. I like where the story is going and I hope you do try a bit harder when it comes to animation in conversations. I really would like to see just a decent amount of fbf. It doesnt have to be glorious, but just there to keep me interested.

I enjoyed the extras as well. Keep em' coming
-Kartunehustla